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Friday, July 28, 2017

Writing:by Marara


It was a bright Saturday afternoon. I was sitting lazily on the lazy boy when mum yelled “we're going to the pools”. I excitedly jumped off the sofa and ran to get ready.

When I was getting ready Gabriel burst into my room and yelled “we’re leaving soon”. I quickly stuffed in my togs and towel then rushed to the car as fast as lightning.On the way to the pools we went past a long bridge, shops that sold toys and lollies, and went past trees that looked like they were touching the sky. As i wound down the window I heard the birds chirping it was so peaceful that i hadn't released we had reached our destination.

When we reached our destination, I bolted out the car door like a horse and ran straight to the pool door. When everyone else had scrambled out the door they all  raced up to meet me.I raced inside and mum paid for us  to get in. I raced into the changing room and got dressed in record time then went for  swim.

When I jumped into the pool it was ice-cold. I was thinking about hopping out when I saw Gabriel Diving in so I stayed In. After a few minutes, it  started to get warm. So i dived in head first and started swimming like a fish. Finally mum called us up for lunch.For lunch we had hot crispy chips, they were delicious because I hadn’t eaten in a long time we also had ice-cold drinks they were so cold that water was dripping off the side. They were so nice that as soon as i smelt it i was drooling. When we were finished Gabriel and I went for a little swim because we had to leave soon.



At 4:00 clock mum called us up and we packed up and headed home. That day was the best day ever because I hadn’t been to the pools in a long time.Where haven't you been to in a long time?

1 comment:

  1. Hi marara nice to see your writing getting better and better

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